The final crit today would have been easier to present if I had a digital version of my work, as since we were in the seminar room it was a little daunting to stand there with nothing to read and pass my work around the room, but it's something I need to keep building on and improving.
However I got some really good feedback on my work, such as how the colours do convey the subtle sense of danger, along with the imagery, without being too scary or possibly putting people off attending the lecture.
It was said that in order to improve I need to be able to back up what i've done and explain why clearly. I think I have experimented a lot with this brief and been able to justify and elaborate on most of the things I've done which is an improvement from the last module.
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