For the final crit I showed these two versions to my group in the final crit, as I wasn't sure which colour scheme was most effective. The red is a more obvious choice because it is bold and vibrant and stands out, it also relates to the clothing brand 'Obey' which the title is referring back to. The yellow is a lot more subtle but still conveys danger and is also quite vibrant. It would be good to experiment with the inks in the screen print session.
In my crit I received some really positive feedback, especially about the hand rendered type, people found it effective and it was said that the design was successful which was good to hear. Something to bare in mind was that the hand rendered text could look like the work of Oliver Jeffers, who illustrates for children's books, however I'm still happy with how it looks.
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