Your_Telegraph-D&AD from Jack Solomon on Vimeo.
This was our final deliverable for the brief. Jack took the files that I prepared and through this he manipulated it and animated it. We wanted to produce something that was professional and informative, which communicated our concept more indepth than just static jpgs. The voice over adds an informative personal touch which helps comprehension of what is happening on screen. It demonstrates the user's journey through the app from start to finish, which is what we had been baring in mind whilst creating Your Telegraph. It not only shows the concept but provides a how-to for users. It shows professionalism and the dedication we have to the brief. Jack did an amazing job of animating everything, and the hard work paid off immensely!
The feedback we got from peers was highly positive, a lot of people seemed impressed with what we had come up with. Some people in our class said they found it hard to take all the information in in the first listen which is understandable as we have come up with a number of key features, however the majority understood the concept and said they would use this app.
Simon suggested that another voice would have been more effective, as my voice sounds quite young, and very northern. We didnt have time to find someone else who was available, so we had to keep to what we had. Simon said that this wasn't much of an issue once he rewatched the video.
Overall I think what we have created is a great piece of work which me and Jack can be proud of.
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